*gulps* That line about how good they were at the little things about broke my heart. For damn it! if the little things work, who cares about the big things. *wants a sequel* Gorgeous, gorgeous writing that comes along so subtle and unobtrusive that your characters let us experience the story through their minds. Awesomely done, really! Thanks so much for this.
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re: When Things End Badly
Date: 2010-09-17 07:14 pm (UTC)That line about how good they were at the little things about broke my heart. For damn it! if the little things work, who cares about the big things. *wants a sequel* Gorgeous, gorgeous writing that comes along so subtle and unobtrusive that your characters let us experience the story through their minds. Awesomely done, really! Thanks so much for this.