"Really, Potter, you don't have to be the living embodiment of heterosexuality to play Quidditch anymore, they changed the rules,"
Hahahaha! Zing! I love how you've written their banter, it says such a lot about their personalities and sets the atmosphere for the sexual encounter really well.
I must say, I do feel for James though. His Dad was the youngest house player in a century and his mother was actually a professional player, not to mention all his Quidditch prodigy uncles. No pressure, dude. *pets him*
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Date: 2009-10-28 02:34 pm (UTC)Hahahaha! Zing! I love how you've written their banter, it says such a lot about their personalities and sets the atmosphere for the sexual encounter really well.
I must say, I do feel for James though. His Dad was the youngest house player in a century and his mother was actually a professional player, not to mention all his Quidditch prodigy uncles. No pressure, dude. *pets him*