OMG! There are no words for how much I loved this. Young!Teddy is just adorable.
This cracked me up at a most inopportune time: "I saw Victoire last week," Teddy adds, pushing his ice cream around in the glass. "Shekissedme," he blurts out, and hears Harry's gentle laugh. "On the cheek," he adds, because anything else would just be horrible.
The tone of this is brilliant! It sounds so much like a small child's mind! And I love the little touches like Teddy liking quiet and chocolate (like his dad), the moon and stars pyjamas, the Chudley Canons backpack... everything.
I really hope that this will be a long series! I adore Teddy/James!
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Date: 2008-08-20 09:20 pm (UTC)This cracked me up at a most inopportune time: "I saw Victoire last week," Teddy adds, pushing his ice cream around in the glass. "Shekissedme," he blurts out, and hears Harry's gentle laugh. "On the cheek," he adds, because anything else would just be horrible.
The tone of this is brilliant! It sounds so much like a small child's mind! And I love the little touches like Teddy liking quiet and chocolate (like his dad), the moon and stars pyjamas, the Chudley Canons backpack... everything.
I really hope that this will be a long series! I adore Teddy/James!