http://planejane.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] planejane.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] leashy_bebes 2010-10-13 03:09 am (UTC)

Oh my. This was adorable. So tender and sweet-hot. You captured their youth, inexperience and burgeoning desire so beautifully.

"Come on, shh now, shh," Merlin's muttering, and Arthur realises only then that his breath is ragged, that it sounds almost like sobbing, that he's fucking frantic.

That line slayed me.



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