Such a brilliant, absorbing story, that's the problem! The world you've created is very believable to me - I love the glimpses we get of the different family relationships - Scorpius being wary of James initially because he's never experienced that sort of boisterous, knockabout brotherly relationship, and the antipathy between James and Albus but the love underneath it all. And the way that the Malfoys and the Potters are very different, but both completely loving and functional families.

I completely accept that you've probably finished this now, but I'd love to see the conversation between Al and James, possibly after the pub trip, when Al has realised that he's going to have to see a lot more of his annoying big brother a lot more now he's his best friend's boyfriend - Al maybe warning James not to hurt Scorpius but at the same time being totally aware of and quite touched by how much James loves Scorpius... as you can probably tell, this has already gone quite far in my imagination...

Anyway - must... do.... some... work...