This section was the best yet! I love how James surprises Scorp with the Tornadoes Quidditch pitch and you write Quidditch really well! A feat that deserves a medal! :D I really like your characterization of Scorpius in here, with his interest in Quidditch and Tornadoes mania. I haven't seen it before, but it somehow fits here. And your James is so sweet and adorable with all the surprises he gives Scorp, especially with the card! So achingly sweet and tender.